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He was so close
He was afraid
--they refused him help
Where should he go?
Time for darkness
Infusion of the sky
Light was venom
Hear him
{he's} close
Sorrow
Wildly down the path {, he runs}
Come to him
In the light beyond.
My first real attempt at Found Poetry that's not all playful and colorful; I do not like how it turned out, though I think I can do much better with more practice. It was circled in pencil at first, so I could change things around if I needed to...but I'm a noob that apparently can't circle things neatly, so it turned out crappy blah blah.
If you want to see some awesome found-ness and poetry, pleaaaase go here:
She's just awesome!
I used "The Yearling" by Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings
That's a pretty deep book, if you're interested.
Oh, and I will be uploading it to my other account:
He was afraid
--they refused him help
Where should he go?
Time for darkness
Infusion of the sky
Light was venom
Hear him
{he's} close
Sorrow
Wildly down the path {, he runs}
Come to him
In the light beyond.
My first real attempt at Found Poetry that's not all playful and colorful; I do not like how it turned out, though I think I can do much better with more practice. It was circled in pencil at first, so I could change things around if I needed to...but I'm a noob that apparently can't circle things neatly, so it turned out crappy blah blah.
If you want to see some awesome found-ness and poetry, pleaaaase go here:
She's just awesome!
I used "The Yearling" by Marjorie Kinnan Rawlings
That's a pretty deep book, if you're interested.
Oh, and I will be uploading it to my other account:
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I think its awesome, but when you do your next one try and lead your readers to the words better, you know what I am saying? I was a bit confused at first, but all in all it's great for your first piece of found poetry! Very thought provoking.